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This story has been on my mind for 6 years! I'm glad I'm now able to start making progress on it.

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O my gosh!!! That was amazing!!! I love the way you describe things, it’s very captivating. I’m a huge book fan and I can tell this’ll be one of my favorites!

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I’m honored, thank you. Those are really kind words. And scary words! I hope to live up to your expectations.

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That was intense.

I love it.

The symbolism was very clear.

At one point you used the word overwhelming but spelled it overwhelmeing.

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Thnaks ;) I’m glad you saw the symbolism there!

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Wow this just blew me away. What a start!!

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Thank you, Tam! The rest of the story will hopefully do the same.

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